4 comments«1»coffeemanReport 2012-07-14 10:02:02I love your stories!!Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-06 19:59:08Story starts off very well…….. then seems to die off in the last few paragraphs. then seems to die off in the last few paragraphs. Better details and longer plot are what’s neededAnonymous readerReport 2008-07-16 13:25:19very well written, i thought it was verry goodAnonymous readerReport 2008-06-13 02:20:02that seems terrible…«1» then seems to die off in the last few paragraphs. 4 comments«1»coffeemanReport 2012-07-14 10:02:02I love your stories!!Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-06 19:59:08Story starts off very well…….. 4 comments«1»coffeemanReport 2012-07-14 10:02:02I love your stories!!Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-06 19:59:08Story starts off very well…….. Better details and longer plot are what’s neededAnonymous readerReport 2008-07-16 13:25:19very well written, i thought it was verry goodAnonymous readerReport 2008-06-13 02:20:02that seems terrible…«1» then seems to die off in the last few paragraphs. then seems to die off in the last few paragraphs. then seems to die off in the last few paragraphs.
