That would have been a great start. I like it that you didn’t reveal what her stepslut wanted, because that was not the point. That he felt himself familiar and entitled enough with her to use sex (forced) in a bargain, now that was pretty well done. Amazing ending; “wondered when her …home.” Teehee. Amazing ending; “wondered when her …home.” Teehee. Amazing ending; “wondered when her …home.” Teehee. And it was just the right length to reveal a sketch of a situation.Anonymous readerReport 2014-12-31 22:43:25your story is good details were good only thing that was a draw back was it was too briefAnonymous readerReport 2014-12-18 19:16:45Loved all the sex scene should started with the stallion giving it to her. A good story, but it lacks thoroughness and explanations.jhm828Report 2015-07-23 21:06:39Yes enjoyed the story, would like to see part with the brother and the horse.Anonymous readerReport 2015-02-02 03:05:16This was a great sketch! And it was just the right length to reveal a sketch of a situation.Anonymous readerReport 2014-12-31 22:43:25your story is good details were good only thing that was a draw back was it was too briefAnonymous readerReport 2014-12-18 19:16:45Loved all the sex scene should
