2 comments«1»namelessReport 2010-07-03 20:57:57it needs work finish your sentences, either proof read it youself or get someone else to do it for you. the two stories I;ve read has so much potencial its exscrewchating when true genius is let down by poor gramer. 2 comments«1»namelessReport 2010-07-03 20:57:57it needs work finish your sentences, either proof read it youself or get someone else to do it for you. the two stories I;ve read has so much potencial its exscrewchating when true genius is let down by poor gramer. the two stories I;ve read has so much potencial its exscrewchating when true genius is let down by poor gramer. the two stories I;ve read has so much potencial its exscrewchating when true genius is let down by poor gramer. 2 comments«1»namelessReport 2010-07-03 20:57:57it needs work finish your sentences, either proof read it youself or get someone else to do it for you. the two stories I;ve read has so much potencial its exscrewchating when true genius is let down by poor gramer. wake the charactors up????Report 2009-07-21 02:21:53nice but the stories need to be a bit longer tho«1»
