I let my imagination run wild picturing the story; it could have been an older daughter (based on author name), it could be the sister, it could be the mother, hell, it could even be the wife returning. Not enough to give it a negative rating, though. Buff4737anonymous readerReport 2013-04-13 10:51:01Good story and plot, regardless of the haters. Paula didn’t work. She laughed and said, mine is 3” longer and a lot thicker than his is. I am WantSumCandyLittleGirl – just didn’t feel like signing in to post a comment.«123» My only issue is with spelling, grammar, and punctuation. I think I must have gotten Paula pregnant that first day. By tagging the story as Fantasy you allow yourself to write any thing you want and still say that it is tagged correctly because we, the reader, apply our own idea of what exactly is happening.
