The characters are usually pretty believable. Other than that little nit picking I commend you as a talented story teller.Anonymous readerReport 2014-11-25 07:11:24I’m enjoying the story outs exciting and sensitive art the same time!!!!!«12345» Jeff would certainly know that plurals don’t take apostrophes and possessives do. Maybe Rennie
could help the trio out. The characters are usually pretty believable. The characters are usually pretty believable. For those of us who know the difference between “your” and “you’re” it is jarring and takes us out of the magic of the moment to realize that this talented author couldn’t possibly be the articulate successful and well educated character in the story. Maybe Rennie
could help the trio out. Other than that little nit picking I commend you as a talented story teller.Anonymous readerReport 2014-11-25 07:11:24I’m enjoying the story outs exciting and sensitive art the same time!!!!!«12345»
