Not just your misuse of abreviations like “min”, “lil” and “sec” but also your use of “text lingo” instead of words like using “1” insted “one” and worst of all “u” instead of “you”. 11 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2013-06-17 07:02:23Well I try to make another acc but they delete that one to srry if u like my story but they didn’t so I can’t wright anymoreanonymous readerReport 2013-06-17 00:01:01Anonymous reader 2013-06-13 23:22:02
Thank that actually help out a lot I going to do another chapter and see if I can get my duck in row…oh and the character are real just made up the scenarios I am eric but that’s not my name I will see how it goes if I blow ass again I will stopanonymous readerReport 2013-06-16 23:43:24I thought it was good please continueanonymous readerReport 2013-06-16 23:22:02Actually its the refusal to use real words in what is a “written” format that I’m sure the I’ll used “wigger” comment was referring. The “lil” in joes name is fine as it is part of a nickname, so your refusal to spell out many of the words while trying to participate in a written
