It’s still your story and you can ignore him, but you need help to fix this. As far as how soon I get the next segment out you have to look at it from my side. My preferences would be non erotic but they aren’t as well received.«12» I am glad my stories have been received as well as they have. When I sit down to write I have absolutely no idea what I am going to write. It might be publishable, and you should try it you’re interested, but not until it’s cleaned up, please!Anonymous readerReport 2015-04-07 04:27:30I think you should make this into a book it has enough for it I mean the grammar is good and the punctuation is good all you need Id a publisher and your goodAnonymous readerReport 2014-04-16 22:57:19عÙع7هغهخ8عغخهعهمعمهعهعخهغAnonymous readerReport 2013-11-22 17:17:47I would be interested in speaking and working with a publisher. When I sit down to write I have absolutely no idea what I am going to write. My preferences would be non erotic but they aren’t as well received.«12»
