Cumming Inside My Little Sister’s Pussy

You simply need to work on delivering what you relate in a more legible manner.Anonymous readerReport 2009-09-14 17:37:13You’re a very talented writer, and I understand that it must be damn hard to write about something like that. Just need more practice, I suppose.SwingerReport 2009-09-03 15:53:36Story horny but paragraphs needed. Work on your grammar, sentence structure, and plot. Do you wank off about those great days, greenhornet144? Do you wank off about those great days, greenhornet144? Work on your grammar, sentence structure, and plot. There are many more errors, as well, but the worst offense is inconsideration of your reader who must struggle through your story. The only story I ever wrote came out stupidly because every five minutes I’d have to stop and relieve myself.